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| Inzwischen 3 Jahre alt. Ich habe es jetzt mal eben schnell koloriert. In einer einfachen Fassung und dann habe ich einfach mal massig Texturen rübergelegt. Mir gefällt es in der einfachen Form aber besser.
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| Ron (toonsUp admin) - 13.03.11 22:23
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Danke für die Kommentare. Mal sehen, den Cartoon finde ich nicht so dolle, dass ich hier noch mehr Arbeit reinstecke, ggf. werde ich ihn aber noch mal etwas anpassen.
Ich werde das aber auf jeden Fall bei meinen nächsten Werken beachten!
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| Trumix - 13.03.11 22:07
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Bild1 kommt besser rüber. Texturen passen in den seltensten Fällen.
Wobei mir der Baum vom Schatten her irgendwie noch zu sehr schwebt.
Ganz extrem sieht man das am Baumstumpf. Und das wird im Bild2 durch die Textur irgendwie überspielt.
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| Toonster - 12.03.11 20:37
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Dann sollten wir fleißig Kommentare schreiben um auf dem aktuellen Stand zu bleiben
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| boy - 12.03.11 20:34
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Bild 1 top. Bild 2 ist mir zu künstlich. Auch besser finde ich, wäre Bild 1 ohne die Sprühpistole-Schatten. Wirkt sehr unnatürlich-schwebend. Stattdessen Schatten mit einfacher dunkler Farbe (auf abdunkeln gestellt). Wenn du da noch Abstufungen willst, einfach verschieden dunkle Töne nehmen. ...
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| Toonster - 12.03.11 18:52
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Auf dem ersten Bild kommt der Gag besser rüber finde ich.
Auf dem zweiten Bild gefällt mir der abgesägte Baum sehr gut
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| DIPI - 12.03.11 18:04
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Die einfache ist natürlich cartooniger, dennoch sieht auch die "Textur-Orgie" sehr ansprechend aus! Ich finde beide Versionen sehr gelungen!
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| Kringe - 12.03.11 13:04
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Ja, mir auch! Das ist das Problem mit den Special Effects, dass sie Bilder oft "overdressed" erscheinen lassen. Ideal ist es, wenn die "Gewürze" als solche gar nicht auffallen, sondern dem Gericht nur das gewisse Etwas verleihen.
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