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Ein altes Motiv neu koloriert.
http://toonsup.de/cartoons/weihnachten/marx_meets_cola?sid=13998
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(created: 06.03.2017, uploaded: 06.03.17 15:08)
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| Der_Sekundenzeiger - 20.03.17 08:07
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Da hast du nochmal Glück gehabt. Wegen eines Leaks hatte der nämlich Wind davon bekommen und schon seine Hemdsärmel hochgekrempelt.
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| SeplundPetra - 07.03.17 14:17
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Ähm... oh... also... SO war das aber nicht gemeint...
Ich meinte schon, dass das eine personalisierte Geschenkkarte war, aber halt nicht auf Pointe fokussiert Das traue ich Deinem Bruder, nichtbekannterweise, dennoch zu
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| Der_Sekundenzeiger - 07.03.17 01:42
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Danke euch für die vielen und schönen Kommentare.
Ja, Sepl, da gebe ich dir Recht. Der Gag ist sehr langatmig erzählt. Der könnt mehr auf Pointe. Vielleicht versuche ich das auch mal. Vielleicht auch nicht.
Den Nachtrag "Aber ich weiß ja, es war eine Karte für Deinen Bruder" könnte letzterer negativ auffassen. So als müsse man ihm den Witz genauer erklären. Ich sag ihm aber nichts.
Übrigens, ich habe ein Bildchen nur für Dich hochgeladen: http://toonsup.com/cartoons/karotte_seplundpetra_wandzufallsfund?sid=31576
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| SeplundPetra - 06.03.17 19:15
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Wirklich schön koloriert.
Für den Gag fällt mir auf: Ich glaube tatsächlich, weniger Worte wären mehr. Sonst wird man zu sehr auf den Gag gestoßen. Vielleicht einfach sowas wie: "Das ist doch... also... die verklag ich!"
oder: "Scheiß Datenklau."
oder: "Und was ist mit dem Recht am eigenen Bild?!"
Dann bliebe für den Betrachter noch etwas mehr eigener Gedankenspielraum.
Aber ich weiß ja, es war eine Karte für Deinen Bruder. Tolle Aktion.
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| Miezel - 06.03.17 18:23
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Solang die Farbe stimmt....
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| StefanLausl - 06.03.17 17:15
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Ah, ich wollte grade sagen, dass kenne ich doch schon
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| toonsUp Member - 06.03.17 17:08
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Herrlich blöd. Ich hau mich weg.
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