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178 / 2009

roten Gummischuh,
mit diesem Gummischuh
geht sie hinaus.

Zwar ist der Schuh
nix als Gummi nu,
dorch sieht der Schuh total
wie Leder aus.

(Bitte um Vergebung, dass ich das R
aus Reimgründen von nu-r zum do-r-ch beamen musste.
Ging nicht anders.)

Und wie immer lasse ich es
beim Texten von Liedern beim Refräng.
Mehr kann sich eh keiner merken.

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BellaDonna - 30.06.09 10:17
Hehe Dein Fetisch sind also rote Gummischuhe *lach* ;-))
toonsUp Member - 30.06.09 10:11
Jede und jeder, natürlich 

Hi BellaDonna

na, jede und jeder, der wo sowas hat. Ich werd' mich doch hüten, persönliche Traumata zu verarbeiten ;-)))
BellaDonna - 30.06.09 10:03
Und wer ist SIE

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